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hopeful I met this girl amanda about a month ago and recently started talking to her. She seems like a really awesome person. I would like to hang out with her and get to know her a little more and hopefully become good friends. I think she wants to get to know me but i'm not quite sure. Wow i know this is random but i really miss my hair (lol). Anyways i hope to get another new friend. I guess i can throw something old school into the mix.
(3 YEARS WITHOUT THE SUN)
POLISHED AND RENAMED
"ANOTHER DAY WITHOUT THE SUN"
Verse 1: Lyrics of the brightest star
Sent to my lonely heart
I finally realize how far i'd go to save you from the dark
Hoping you'd do the same
This songs for you not the fame
Please don't fade away
Chorus: I'm wishing you lived in this crazy town
Yea you heard what i said
My lifes complete when your around
Tell me how you feel today
Do you still feel the same?
Or am i a piece of garbage you finally threw away
However you feel i can't stand
Another day without the sun
Verse 2: Something tells me to wait
For the one day when were one
Not a single piece has frayed from this heart of mine
I'll wait forever for the sun to return
Its hard to dwell on memories
But even a single image of your face keeps me strong
Chorus: I'm wishing you lived in this crazy town
Yea you heard what i said
My lifes complete when your around
Tell me how you feel today
Do you still feel the same?
Or am i a piece of garbage you finally threw away
However you feel i can't stand
Another day without the sun
Verse 3: I hope i can wake to your face again like i once did
We'll see soon, Yea i promise that to you
Chorus: I'm wishing you lived in this crazy town
Yea you heard what i said
My lifes complete when your around
Tell me how you feel today
Do you still feel the same?
Or am i a piece of garbage you finally threw away
However you feel i can't stand
Another day without the sun
Post Chorus: I miss you more everyday your gone
Hope I'll see the sunshine soon
Maybe the writings in this song
Will help you understand that the sunshine is you
If anyone actually reads this whole thing than let me know what you think of my first actual song.
Anonymous
July 16 2005, 02:15:47 UTC 6 years ago
July 16 2005, 02:17:09 UTC 6 years ago
Hey
Well, first of all...you do have some talent writing, I'll give you that much. However, there's some unpleasent stuff that needs to be said...Man, I know you don't know me, but I love Kay, I love her more than anything, though I know that it won't work right now, no matter how much I might wish otherwise...but some of that shit you're saying in these, it's hurting her, and it's hurting her bad. I'm not sure if that's what you're trying to do...I hope to God that you're not, but I don't really know. She talks about you all the time...you seemed like an alright guy...but after reading some of the stuff I've read today, you're coming off like a dick, like you're trying to end everything between you two. You see, I gave her up so that she could be happy...that's all I wanted for her...and right now, yeah, happy she is not. I don't want her feeling like this...it hurts me to see her hurting like that. You've got her confused man, and you really need to figure this shit out. Take it as you want, like I said earlier, I don't want to sound like an asshole...but I still look out for her...so just take it as friendly advice. Peace out...